It's simple, but that's because Hiko's new.
I like the no-pants style though.

I bet you would... I like keeping things simple... over complication is needless... there is too much going on in yours that i get a tad confused...that and the staff clashes soo bad...

nothing seems to be wrong, i like ur avi default right now :D

too red

the blue circle on ur hands

:D very black

lol very brown

You need an outfit. You're outfit isn't really an outfit yet xD.
Then you can come back for critique :)

D: i like my outfit, its noobish style.

I'm a newb too xD.
I'm sure you can do better than that :P
You didn't critique, by the way. D:

very nice avi for a newbie :] dont seem to be anything wrong xD

you could do with learning how to layer somewhat more efficiently

I find either the scarf or tail a bit much with all the black. Or add another turquoise-y something to the flowingness in the back, like the butt-scarf from the seabreeze item. Or sea carress...? Otherwise I like the tri-colorage and love the glowing turquoise effect by the eye <3

nothing major, but the hair doesnt match the green/blak theme

Yar, but if I make the hair black then the green beads don't stand out as well. So I'm using it as a popper-upper thing.

Hm... for yours, I'd just say that it'd look better if the skirt were under the coat part. :3

i like the way the hair was layered- it made me do a double take .o.