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Dorian Pavus 04-05-2012 01:48 PM

Mine is more of a display piece but you could still stab someone with it and kill them. Good 'nuff for me. ha.

My uncle has an electric knife sharpener that I've thought about running it threw. xD

Espy 04-05-2012 01:57 PM

I had half a mind to buy a kunai set back a few years ago for throwing practice >.>

And my friend told me he's try to get his hands on his shuriken for me back in middle school, but I never heard back about that >.>

Dorian Pavus 04-06-2012 07:40 PM

aww. D :

BTW, if you ever want me to redline your work or even just take a look at it just tell me. : )

Rakura Lynn 04-06-2012 10:52 PM

The Tech on the Arm's and legs,look too flat, and the joints look like they wont bend, I suggest adding more ear details around the elbows or make a space where his scrawny elbow shows, same for the knee. He looks like some one is pulling his hair from behind, have him lean with the sword more and he won't look like some one gave him a wedgie or put ice down his back.

Fauxreal 04-10-2012 05:08 PM

Espy! It looks so great! The only thing I thought was a little off was the lower abs area but I think people already told you. <3

Espy 04-18-2012 01:30 AM

Laughing my ass off at Rakura's critique. But holy crap, so true XDDD

Ah, might as well toss another WIP up here. Practicing drawing armor because my friend wants me to do concept art for a WIP RTS/RPG game and I need to draw guards. With armor. Auuuugh.

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