So feeble. Sirocco only burned the planet to a crisp. :P

I liked Kaym's little 'rebirth' moment. I'm curious to see what Ryuko's new idea of an angel will be.

Posting here just to note, again, that a new scene has been added to the event story. :)

I think if you can put an image of what is going on in the readers head, you've done a really good job. Nice use of tags throughout it all, it wasn't overly descriptive but not so bare as to be stripped to the bare bones.

The ending made me want to read more and there is nothing else so far.
Le sad.