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Natsunaine 02-14-2013 05:41 PM

I personally love the avatar, but for some odd reason the torso is bothering me.. Maybe some little touches of light blue?

Mal Kapwn 02-16-2013 12:48 PM

I really like how well this is put together. The wrench seems a little odd, but I might be missing a cosplay reference.

Asami 02-17-2013 05:24 PM

Very nice but needs more of the dark blue color in the center area
and the light blue towards the head.

Tiva 02-17-2013 10:26 PM

More purple in the pants area... maybe one of the thongs it just doesn't balance well on the eye.

Mal Kapwn 02-18-2013 12:22 AM

The background doesn't seem tied in with the rest of the avatar.

Natsunaine 02-18-2013 02:58 AM

It is a very good avy i really like maybe something around the feet?..

Fauxreal 04-09-2013 06:24 PM

I love the look. What I would add is yellow or red, above or around the head. And maybe a little more by the feetsies. <3

Umaeril 04-14-2013 09:13 AM

Your avatar is stunning and just about flawless to me since I am a fan of lots of layering. The only thing I wonder is why you did not extend the orange/gold up to the head? Also the horns for some reason on my monitor have almost a dark green cast to them. So I would probably switch to a different head item to make this a perfect avatar.

Fauxreal 04-17-2013 02:52 PM

Dang Uma, thanks! Maybe I should start saving my avatars. :)

Yours is basically amazing. I love backgrounds and yours is used perfectly in my opinion. I really wish the skirt had a gold ring on the bottom, but that's not something you can really control. You look gorgeous.

Fauxreal 01-27-2014 09:05 PM

HAHA! I can't! It's awesome. :)

Lawtan 01-27-2014 10:21 PM

Glitter eyes, possibly, or perhaps a purple background, but looks excellent in truth.

Fauxreal 01-28-2014 12:04 AM

Thanks Law!
I am really liking this avi you have. If I were to do anything to your avi... I would change the cape option you have. Maybe use a Guardian Plate one? or I know there is an event one but I can't think of the name.

Kilala Mikal 01-28-2014 06:31 PM

You're pretty spot on, Fauxreal. The only thing (other than clothing shades which are pretty much nothing you can control, and I understand that you're doing the best with what you have available) is that you need eyebrows. Sorry if my parenthesis-ed statement sounds kinda grumpy. >.>

Asami 01-28-2014 07:25 PM

Id say add a nose. And more traces of liliac throughout the avatar.

Lawtan 01-28-2014 07:27 PM

I'd say another dab of see-through green, but it looks lovely :D

Fauxreal 01-29-2014 12:55 AM

I noticed no cape now - I think I would bring a cape back - if there was a white whispy cape that might work? I like my avi's really busy so I don't know. :/ LOL!

Espy 01-29-2014 01:17 AM

Yours isn't particularly busy right now.

Hm. Maybe add something on the arms that's like the ribbons around the feet?

Lawtan 01-29-2014 01:58 AM

...I almost put a blond beard (or war facepaint) on your avatar, Espy.

@Faux - better? (could add tail or wings...but felt that would be redundant)

Espy 01-29-2014 06:54 PM

Facial hair might've been a good idea.

Hrm. Your feet need something red.

Lawtan 01-29-2014 07:02 PM

Umm...Avatar is female.

Tattoo for the face.

Espy 01-29-2014 07:11 PM

No, the first part was for me, the second for you.

Erm. The spear is a bit out of place, color-wise.

Fauxreal 01-30-2014 02:18 AM

Maybe a darker brown face? I find it's quite well put together... I guess if it were me I'd add sparkles! <3

Espy 01-30-2014 02:08 PM

I uh....am not a very sparkly person. And what do you mean by a darker brown face? Skin tone, or the face shadow?

And besides the arm ribbons for you, I think switching to a different pair of boots would be nice -- these happen to be a bit too light.

Lawtan 01-31-2014 06:13 PM

A cloak...

Umm...Halp? (This is the mess I was talking about)

Fauxreal 02-02-2014 12:41 AM

Needs a little yellow at the base? Maybe.

Tiva 02-02-2014 01:33 AM

Something to make the hands stand out better.... they just blend right now.

Fauxreal 02-03-2014 04:53 PM

Nothing! I love it! Didn't you have different hair before?

Liethell 02-04-2014 06:10 PM

I feel like the waves and the purple feather things in the background make the whole icon way too crowded?

go easy on me, I still have no idea how this fashion stuff works //falls down a staircase

Tohopekaliga 02-04-2014 06:25 PM

With the loudness of your pants, the tank top seems out of place.

Gallagher 02-04-2014 08:10 PM

Need more jellies.

Alternatively, fewer non-jelly things.

Lawtan 02-05-2014 12:12 AM

Jellyfish? Perhaps...
More contrast, perhaps...

Pinkie 02-12-2014 02:39 PM

I like it but I must say the green is out of place...um...try changing it to a black or...a dark brown. I would vote on black though lol

Espy 02-12-2014 03:10 PM

I think the bottom needs to be a bit more tech-y and silver.

Lawtan 02-12-2014 03:19 PM

*Is wondering where you found a stubble*
Hmm...perhaps a sword on the far side (Avi's left)to balance the black hip-pauldron.

Espy 02-12-2014 03:39 PM

I'd've given Renard a warhammer if we /had/ a warhammer. I could have given him a crossbow, which we do have, but it felt too clunky on the avatar.

The dark green is fine, but the pale green is a bit.........eh. Perhaps choose another tree?

Lawtan 02-13-2014 03:55 PM

The blue on the belt is a bit off...

Anatidae 02-13-2014 11:21 PM

I'd say adding a little more red at the feet to tie in with the feather. Though even that's not really needed, I love the avatar as is.

Polly101 02-17-2014 08:41 AM

I think its still incomplete, how about adding accessories like some silver chainsbor something and a bit more red things or how about a red backpack? c:

Espy 02-17-2014 11:37 AM

The red of the belt is really throwing me off o.o;; Also, the wings don't.../quite/...fit? They're a bit too pixie-like compared to the rest of the avi.

Fauxreal 02-17-2014 04:19 PM

Can I just say I love the red secretly everywhere...
Maybe something more silvery at the base?


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