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Funkduder 07-16-2011 03:27 AM

As are you, from what I have seen so far. So do tell me: who are you?

Elf healer 07-16-2011 04:24 AM

Masked dancers all 'round
Girls wearing beautiful gowns
"May I have this dance?"~

(I don't know. Just made it up on the spot xD It's sort of short and I'm wondering if I should put more >.>)

Quiet Man Cometh 07-16-2011 08:20 PM

Haiku are always short. Though apparently once can say a heck of a lot more in 17 syllables of Japanese than 17 syllables of English. so English is as a titch of a disadvantage.

Funkduder 07-16-2011 08:26 PM

The disadvantage
is more prominent among
western than east

Elf healer 07-16-2011 10:09 PM

Quiet:
Your eggs have been clicked
Hopefully they grow up strong
I know how it feels (for them to die)

Bracket parts don't count for the syllables XD
XD I love writing poems. I wrote pretty good ones years ago, haven't written some in ages. Haiku poems are funny and easy to write XD

Quiet Man Cometh 07-16-2011 11:59 PM

Thank you, Elf Healer,
For your aid to my dragons.
A generous act. :)

Funkduder 07-17-2011 12:10 AM

I believe I'm sad;
Loneliness now takes one, who
is known as Fenrir

A forgotten God,
Wrestled in chains of duties
Gifts to him ribbon.

Elf healer 07-17-2011 12:15 AM

You are most welcome
It is my pleasure to help
Those who are in need
:)

Elf healer 07-17-2011 12:23 AM

This Haiku contest
Has turned into Haiku chat
Hard to find entries

:P

Quiet Man Cometh 07-17-2011 12:35 AM

perhaps entries by PM?
(is not speaking in haiku)
Or am I really?
...

Funkduder 07-17-2011 12:36 AM

Are they all entries?
I will enter as I go
Because it's my speak.

Quiet Man Cometh 07-17-2011 12:46 AM

This confuses me!
I do not know what to write.
Knotted maze of thoughts!


Tis a silly thread.
What do we do about it?
Blame the Funkduder!

Espy 07-17-2011 12:53 AM

Really. I'm resisting the urge to facepalm at this. But I've been known the speak in Shakespearian/pentameter. Which would...actually...be perfect for this event.

(c-c-c-combo breaker!)

Quiet Man Cometh 07-17-2011 12:55 AM

Iambic pentameter yeah?

Unless of course, one was a commoner or a fool. Then regular prose works well enough. ;)

Espy 07-17-2011 12:58 AM

-headdesk- Actually, irl, that was a head-computer.

Somehow it just comes naturally to me,
And Espy plays the fool too many times~

Quiet Man Cometh 07-17-2011 01:00 AM

Natural enough that not everyone tends to notice, or so I've seen. It does explain the funny gaps in the writng though.

Espy 07-17-2011 01:02 AM

Speaking of which, I hate it when people try to force syllables into haikus, or pentameter. It just sounds so darn wrong >.<

Quiet Man Cometh 07-17-2011 01:04 AM

Yeah. I try to follow the natural lilt of words when I can. This does mean I tend to write a fair bit of free verse rather than formed poetry. I can lose patience with a sonnet and try and cram a word in to finish it.

Espy 07-17-2011 01:06 AM

Sonnets are just two lines too long for me, because I suck at ending stuff.

Funkduder 07-17-2011 01:10 AM

Indeed, the attempt
is trite when not naturally
spoken out to them

Also you, espy.
You look absolutely...nice,
a good change for you

Espy 07-17-2011 01:11 AM

My usual colors.
Turns out I was not as tired
as I thought I was.

(I got tired of red for a while, explaining the purple avi some time ago.)

Funkduder 07-17-2011 01:14 AM

A red or purple?
I do not care of color.
You still look stunning.

Espy 07-17-2011 01:28 AM

-blushes- Why thank you >.<

Funkduder 07-17-2011 01:43 AM

You are welcome

Aiko 07-17-2011 03:52 PM

Hm I might consider this... though I write Haiku better in my own language :/
I might still try though ^_^;;

Quiet Man Cometh 07-17-2011 10:39 PM

Have my entry written up. Nothing overy fancy, just a standard haiku. Would I be able to PM it to you, Sei to keep it seperate -and easier to distinguish- from the chat in the thread, or do you want them posted here?

EDIT: whoops! Just read the thread back and found out my answer. Resolved! I'll PM it to you and maybe post it here later. :)

Espy 07-17-2011 11:19 PM

Random question. Can I write a tanka (5-7-5-7-7) instead of just a haiku? It's much easier for me.

Quiet Man Cometh 07-17-2011 11:20 PM

I asked that earlier. I believe it was fine but you can check over on page one to be sure. :)

Funkduder 07-18-2011 08:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aiko (Post 771610)
Hm I might consider this... though I write Haiku better in my own language :/
I might still try though ^_^;;

And which language
is the one that you do claim?
Is English not yours?

Shirelin 07-18-2011 09:16 PM

The night is alight
with beautiful sounds this time
unlike last night's droll.

I figured I would join in :3

Quiet Man Cometh 07-18-2011 09:47 PM

That definately makes a strong image, Shirelin.

Shirelin 07-18-2011 09:52 PM

Thank you, Quiet *Smiles*

Ashy 07-18-2011 10:55 PM

not an entry, this is espescially for sei

Ashy came back home.
She loves Sei so much that she
wrote a haiku for him

Funkduder 07-19-2011 09:34 PM

"The importance of this event"
This is a new age
A door to a centaury
of which I'm a part

Sei 07-19-2011 09:43 PM

Wow... you guys're good! xD

Lucid: 07-19-2011 09:57 PM

Underestimate
not our fierce love for haiku.
To write is to live.

Reyoki 07-19-2011 09:58 PM

The queen welcomes us.
Stunning lights and fine music.
Will you dance with me?

Espy 07-19-2011 10:03 PM

Espy spins out poems
Without too much prior thought...
...Lest she has a block.

Funkduder 07-20-2011 12:32 AM

Don't think much, old friend
For here in this place we talk
anew, under masks.

Kaguya 07-21-2011 07:49 PM

Not a hiku but a poem I wanted to share anyway...

Said by many
heard by so few
three little words
I love you

I hope you all like it, sleep deprivation talking lol.


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