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Red Lion
03-04-2013 05:16 PM
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Originally Posted by Disgusting Creep
(Post 1508516)
Willis; I'm pretty sure I told you how cold it is in here already... Going to bed without pants isn't exactly an option.
and yes, I am aware that OCs would be the vague, general idea of topic focus. I was more looking for specific aspects of conversation to which I could relate, as I know nothing about the particular story already being discussed and thus have little to add. :P
I am making Art of Chocobo's queen of hearts character and Chocobo is explaining his backstory.
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 05:20 PM
though if i was less lzy i would finish the version with the correct skirt XD the patterns are iconic enough you can tell without a title who he is
uncledaddy
03-04-2013 05:25 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by littl3chocobo
(Post 1508519)
you can relate by talking about an oc of yours who has a particularily complex backstory or by asking questions, honestly having people ask is how i come up with some of my better stuff XD fresh ideas and all that
OK, yes. This is what I meant. We are talking about complex backstories and such, got it. And I do like when people ask questions. They just tend not to. r nr
Not that I'm very good at coming up with questions to ask, myself. There's always "what inspired this idea?" and "do you spend a lot of time fine-tuning the details?", though.
As for my own, I guess it depends on what you'd consider complex. Some are definitely more involved than others, but they're all unique and interesting in their own way.
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 05:28 PM
i prefer "why did xx say that?' XD like you were talking about real people
i mean someone you could believe was a real person because they are 3d enough to have personalities outside of the cookie-cutter ones
Red Lion
03-04-2013 05:28 PM
Willis and I have tons of OCs, but I'd have to say Kurt and Randy are my favorite.
Especially with my main OC that has the thing that creeps a cho.
bwahahaha
Red Lion
03-04-2013 05:35 PM
Actually, There's something willis and I do to sort of "flesh out" our characters, we start with a simple statement.
"What kind of ice cream is xx and why?"
You'd be surprised how much something like that can contribute.
Gallagher
03-04-2013 05:37 PM
Ohhhh, I love questions like that, too~ Always so much fun to figure out. But actually using a character in a rp is what gets me the most progress.
Of course, that might be because of the types of rps I do, too.
uncledaddy
03-04-2013 05:37 PM
I do like when OCs are treated as though they were real people; it adds a lot more dimension to them. I give all of my characters love and consideration. Like willis said, Kurt and Randy VIII (not to be confused with Randy, by the way, as that would be his father--though he, too, has quite a backstory) are both very intricate and have a lot of tangled history between them. All of my characters, though, are very much "alive" to me and have their own distinct personalities and traits. Character development is one of my favorite things in the world, so you can bet I don't leave much of anything out.
Gallagher
03-04-2013 05:41 PM
My main OC has this slight issue of being more trouble than he's worth and pretty much unable to play major roles in any exciting rps without serious tweaks. Ugu.
uncledaddy
03-04-2013 05:44 PM
Ohhh? Why would that be? o 3o
Red Lion
03-04-2013 05:45 PM
I rarely RP with anyone but Willis, had to many terrible RPs going on...
So it takes a lot to convince me to RP with someone else now.
Cirque
03-04-2013 05:45 PM
I come back to character development!! This is wonderful. I love coming up with characters.
Gallagher
03-04-2013 05:48 PM
Uhhh. Because he's sort of albino but not totally with no special powers or magic or athletic ability or good depth perception.
So. Pretty much useless in any adventures or anything exciting. Especially in anything historical. He has to go totally AU and have major overhauls whenever I want to include him in stuff like that.
On the plus, I've gotten good at tweaking without losing who he is.
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 05:48 PM
;_; his bunnyrabbit eye.........
i actually dont ask those sorts of questions XD
me either, my chars are custom made for the story they are in, i have only tried making a char for recycling a couple times and it never works, to make a char work is to have him grow and to take off all that growth to make him fit elsewhere messes things up
uncledaddy
03-04-2013 05:48 PM
Character development is the bestest. If you want me to come out from under my fridge, just mention OCs. I am all over it.
Willis; same. >:s I haven't even considered RPing with someone else in ages, though. I don't even try. It's always terrible and nobody has any ideas that interest me and apparently vice versa.
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 05:48 PM
your char was perfect for our rp galla XD
Gallagher
03-04-2013 05:50 PM
I KNOW! And it's such an easy, safe setting, I dunno why it was giving me so much trouble.
Ugu. I'm just so used to doing things with Deadsie.
I really need to work on trying to reply to my Suzebby now though. That rp has been sitting for only ever. But it's even harder, because it's a character I haven't used at all yet.
Cirque
03-04-2013 05:51 PM
It's been ages since I've roleplayed with any of my OCs, which is a shame. Most of my roleplay partners tend to stick with Fandoms and the canon characters, so I've adapted to that. Which is fun, too, but not as freeing as working with my own character.
uncledaddy
03-04-2013 05:51 PM
Majority of mine and Willis's OCs are together in the same "universe", but a lot of them have varied backgrounds and places of origin. If we come up with something that doesn't really feel like it belongs in our main world, we do it separately.
Edit; Fandom is something I generally don't touch. If it makes use of someone else's creation, I don't really want anything to do with it.
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 05:54 PM
me and pog just come up with whatever, make a pair of chars that would compliment each other and go from there XD we dont do fandom really(this is as close as we have ever gotten) and we have all sorts of timelines and universes
Experienced and literate RPer my pasty white buttocks.
Nexess
03-04-2013 05:55 PM
-munches on chips and watches everyone- I don't RP.
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 05:58 PM
oh god, are they a 'i like salt. salt is good. hiro liked salt. hiros ate lots of things with salt.'
XD it is! dude i cant rp with those people, i will take a typo if i can read the damn post but my dyslexia cant handle that level of stupid shit
your writing is not so bad though~ and the first few posts are the perfect length
if you think my crap is tolerable we should try and rp some time XD
Cirque
03-04-2013 05:59 PM
@Red: It's really hard to find roleplay partners. When I was on gaia, it was hell, and I haven't really bothered with roleplaying on forums since. It's just too much trouble, and I'd feel bad just going "sorry, no."
uncledaddy
03-04-2013 05:59 PM
Wahahahahaha... "She better got get those money". How did you keep up with that for so long. How.
Gallagher
03-04-2013 06:00 PM
I am the master of character recycling and AUs. The main pair I do we've done like... xkjgbhkjng.
Oh boy. And out of those... 2 have been suicidal, 2 have dealt with addiction, 1 with rape, and 1 with all of those at once.
xghxgjhj
-flailflail-
I need to write more character selections. I haven't added any to my writing thread in ages.
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 06:04 PM
want to see the last rp i tried outside of pog?
Red Lion
03-04-2013 06:05 PM
I tend to make a lot of typos and the quality of my work varies depending on how invested I am. I can write reasonable stuff if I need to.
Here's a little bit on Kurt, from his origin story. Need some work though.
"Herr Major?"
Kurt was brought out of his thoughts by the voice of a young boy"Ja?" he replied turning to look down at the young soldier. He sighed inwardly. The lad was barely into his teens, probably drafted into the youth like so many other, Kurt himself had been such a boy when his life as a soldier began. He'd been different back then, new and clean and pure, just like this boy who stood before him in a uniform that represented concepts and ideas no one so young and innocent could fathom.
"Speak up lad, I'm listening" Kurt barked harshly. Whether he liked his job anymore or not, he was an officer and he had to remember his duties and his rank.
The boy bit his lip "We're going to die to day aren't we?" he asked quietly, dark eyes full of fear.
For a moment Kurt almost entertained the thought of giving the boy some false hope but he knew that innocence couldn't live forever and that even a child should know that mercy was nothing but a foreign dream for them "Ja we've lost the war. There's nothing left for us to do but die like the men we are" he put a hand on the boy's shoulder "We won't be remembered for our actions either,not in a good way at least, we aren't the hero's of this story. When we die today that's the end, we can only hope to maintain a shred of our dignity by dying like real soldiers, no begging, no weeping, we must always remember our courage,".
The boy face twisted in dismay and Kurt felt suddenly very old. At Thirty-Two he felt ancient perhaps it was a good thing that the end was in sight. He'd spend twenty years serving this country, a country who's morals he now questioned and who's honor was long tainted. But he was still proud, he would always be proud, wrong or right....a German soldier does not turn his back on his nation.
"Don't lose heart yet,"
Kurt turned to see his longtime friend Wilhelm, "You know as well as I do, even if we survive this last battle the Allied forces won't go easy on us, it will be the firing squad for certain,".
"you don't know that! We could escape, there's still time to run," Wilhelm replied, his pale brow furrowing and his light brown hair falling into his eyes, "Kurt, you don't have to die today," he insisted with an eagerness that unsettled Kurt.
Kurt was transfixed by the eerie gleam in his comrade's eye. Wilhelm had changed quite a bit over the past year. He had become pale and increasingly withdrawn, and there was the strangest aura around him. For the first time in his life Kurt felt that he didn't know his friend.
"What the devil are you talking about?!" Kurt growled. "Do you know something I don't?"
Wilhelm shrugged "Perhaps...Maybe you'll find out today. Oh don't glare at me like that I'm your friend, just trust me." Wilhelm fixed his strangely luminous violet eyes on Kurt. "We are still friends aren't we?" he asked.
Kurt narrowed his eyes and gave a hesitant nod. Then he turned and left, Battle was raging on the ground and his unit would be dispatched soon...he had to prepare.
One hour left before deployment. Kurt was in the washroom shaving. Being well groomed wouldn't help him in the slightest but, it gave him comfort to do something with his time, he felt like he was preforming a last ritual to prepare for his execution. He ran the razor over his cheek one last time then peered into the mirror. He needed a hair cut, his curling, messy, white-blond hair was starting to look ragged and strands were hanging in his silvery grey eyes. He was not a very handsome man. He had rough hawkish features and ruddy tanned skin. Dark circles under his eyes and the lines etched around his thin mouth gave testimony to the hardships he had endured. He picked up a pair of shears and prepared to trim his hair when the call to move out was sounded. Putting the shears down he gave his reflection a final long look.
"Well time to die." He said grimly.
He put on his coat and smoothed out any wrinkles, his uniform spotless, he did not run out of the barracks, rather he walked, marching with all the courage and dignity he could summon to meet his end.
Red Lion
03-04-2013 06:06 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Disgusting Creep
(Post 1508601)
Wahahahahaha... "She better got get those money". How did you keep up with that for so long. How.
......Determination and stubbornness are my prime characteristics.
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 06:07 PM
dude, sounds like something i read on aff.net XD
Red Lion
03-04-2013 06:09 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by littl3chocobo
(Post 1508619)
dude, sounds like something i read on aff.net XD
Aff.Net
Never heard of it, is that a bad thing?
littl3chocobo
03-04-2013 06:11 PM
no, it just means the story sounds like a story i have already read XD
Gallagher
03-04-2013 06:12 PM
I like this Kurt guy.
Ugu, I want to post writing now, but everything that isn't just inappropes has already been posted somewhere on tris. >n>
Red Lion
03-04-2013 06:12 PM
Ah, ok.
It is in severe need of ironing out and editing. That story is from about 3-4 years ago. I was in my teens when I started writing it.
uncledaddy
03-04-2013 06:13 PM
I would consider posting something, but I don't know what. :P
Red Lion
03-04-2013 06:15 PM
Gallagher: Kurt is my favorite OC been fine tuning him for years.
In his office Grimmer let out an infuriated yell; he tried to call his men on the intercom but everything was silence. The power was down, he knew this had to be Kurt's doing, the man was just too damn clever for this to be an unfortunate coincidence.
Fumbling around his desk for a flashlight the former Colonel muttered obscenities under his breath. Damn Kurt Kraus! Damn him to hell! He'd stolen his glory during the war, he'd killed off his men, he'd killed his granddaughter. Grimmer had been a fool to keep him alive this long. He'd underestimated the man, underestimated him in a way that had cost him dearly. He'd thought of Kurt as the boy, the hapless youth of decades past. That little boy would never have accomplished all this, for the first time Colonel Grimmer was forced to acknowledge that his adversary was a man, a cunning and experienced man.
This revelation instilled fear in him. His image of Kurt as a weak, inferior, boy scout of a soldier was shattered, he'd seen the guards, and Sarah, the young man in his teens would never have been capable of that. He'd only heard stories of Kurt's ruthlessness as a full grown officer, he'd never believed them. He saw now that he should have. Now it was too late though, wasn't it? Now he was alone in his office in a dark building with a dangerous predator who was likely on his way to come and get him....
Bile rose in his throat, he was going to be sick, every thing was crashing down around him. Even now more units were being dispatched but what good would it do? In this darkness they'd never find a vampire, Kurt has successfully tipped the scale in his favor, and there was no way to stop him now. The Doctor had warned him that Kurt was dangerous, even for a vampire, but he'd been to full of himself to see...wait, that was it! The Doctor!
He finally found a flashlight and he clicked it on, if he could just get to the Doc before Kurt did then maybe he could come up with a plan! Yes! The doctor's laboratory would even have power. The Doc had insisted that the power for the lab run on its own circuit, he must have anticipated something like this would eventually happen. Kurt hadn't won yet!
...
In his laboratory on the first sub level the Doctor was busy taking the blood sample he'd gotten from Kurt and putting it into a syringe, he had no options left, it was either become a vampire or die of the infection, his arm had rotted away to nearly nothing, his fingers had decayed and fallen off and his skin, blackened and swollen, was splitting and oozing pus in places. He steeled himself and then plunged the needle into his chest and waited.
There was pain, terrible pain as he began changing. Dizzy and sick he clutched at the lab table, it was as if his entire body was rebelling against itself. His heartbeat increased to a staggering pulse before stopping and for one horrifying moment he thought he was dead, then...all was quiet. He opened his eyes and cringed, his brightly lit laboratory was to much for his eyes to bear. He groped blindly against the nearby wall until he found the switch and turned it down. With the lights dimmed he was able to see again, he felt weak and sickly but his arm no longer burned with infection. He examined it, already the swelling was going down and his skin was returning to a pinkish color as the blackness faded.
It was just as the Doctor was getting to his feet that Grimmer burst through the doors.
...
Erik Gerhardt hadn't been working as a hunter for very long, he'd only been hired a few months ago, when he'd heard that the organization he worked for captured and researched vampires he'd figured he'd struck gold with a crazy and rich employer. He thought the most he'd ever be asked to do was take a camera and try to get some sightings of vampires. Like he'd seem people on television do with the yeti...walk around and act like he was looking for things. Easy money.
Not quite, first he was shown those hideous zombie creatures in the lab, then he was actually trained to take down and fight monsters like that. He'd encountered a total of six vampires and now this Kurt Kraus he was supposed to be looking for was loose and there was no electricity. The dark halls seemed to stretch forever in all directions and the further he walked the more like a monster each shadow looked. He had nothing but a flashlight and a gun...some how he didn't think that would be enough.
It was to quiet, shouldn't he have run into the guards or the other hunters? His foot touched something soft and when he lifted it something dripped from it, he turned the beam of his light to the ground and choked back a cry. He'd just stepped into the spilled bowels of a dead guard!
Erik turned and vomited, he couldn't look at it for another second. It was as if someone or something had reached a hand into the man's body and ripped out what was inside. When he'd finished heaving he heard a scraping sound echo around him. He turned a full 360 degrees, he saw nothing, nothing but blood stains. There was another scrape and a soft clang, like a hand striking something hollow. It sounded so close, but he didn't see anyone. He strained his ears, the sound of movement again.
Then he realized where the noise was coming from. Above him...
He didn't look up, he knew that this creature was waiting for him to do so, or it would have killed him before now. He took a step, the thing above him moved. Another step and again movement, it was creeping right over head. He could hear it breathing now, heavy and anticipating. Don't look at it, it will kill you if you look at it...he said to himself. He quickened his pace a little, above him the vampire followed, it's lanky limbs propelling it forward after him. He broke into a run and the monster was right behind him. Clang, clang, clatter clang, the sound of hands and feet striking the pipes beat a terrible tattoo in his ears as it pursued him to the end of the hall. Just make it to a room and close the door! his brain screamed. He saw a room just ahead, the clanging above him was almost deafening. With a final burst of speed Erik rushed into the room and slammed the door.
He sank to his knees and heaved great choking sobs of relief. He wept loudly for several minutes before he heard a loud thump as something dropped down in front of him. He froze, after a few terrified minutes he looked up, there was a tall man staring down at him with luminous eyes and gore coating his chin and hands.
Erik didn't even have time to scream.
And this was the last post I made in the story, about a year ago I wrote this segment, I've used Kurt as a main character in RPs but haven't finished writing about his background yet.