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littl3chocobo 07-04-2011 11:14 AM

ok so i saw this when you first posted and didn't say anything but it really bugs me, the use of a photo bg with a drawn picture looks terrible unless the picture is realistic and yours most certainly not, it just looks really...well, lazy as a whole, like you sorta threw it in last-moment to kill some whitespace, maybe you should draw the bg out, it would help with contenuity for sure and you could do something to fix that foot thing that was bothering you

Quiet Man Cometh 07-04-2011 08:43 PM

Personally I don't think the background is that bad. I've certainly seen a lot worse when people tack on a background. The shading is good so far and it doesn't look like the character was cut-pasted into the background.

Easy enough to trace the background onto a different layer to make it more in tune with the man I suppose, if it's really needed.

Espy 07-04-2011 08:48 PM

Ok, I'm putting in "WIP" in the title x______X

@Chocobo: I'm considering tracing the bg, but it's a placeholder for the time being. If I don't redraw the bg, I'll at least balance and adjust its colors.

@Quiet: Thanks. I'll see what happens by the time I'm done with this.

Quiet Man Cometh 07-04-2011 09:03 PM

You have a new egg!

Espy 07-05-2011 04:53 PM

Hm? The Dragon Cave ones?

Quiet Man Cometh 07-05-2011 08:11 PM

Yup. Didn't see the little green and yellow stripy guy a few days ago.

Espy 07-05-2011 08:37 PM

That's the one I bred. It's the same as the spring one on the right...I think.

Quiet Man Cometh 07-05-2011 08:50 PM

Nifty. I keep debating the game. That or the flower one. I'll stop going off topic now.

How's your project coming?

Espy 07-05-2011 09:16 PM

Game? What?

And I made a teeny tiny bit of progress, not enough to make me wanna post it.

Quiet Man Cometh 07-05-2011 09:25 PM

Oh, I mean the dragon egg thing. I keep pondering getting an egg.

It's good that your working on it. I take forever to do anything. No hurry. :)

V. Lisette 07-08-2011 06:30 PM

It's actually not as bad as it sounded at first. I almost like the simplicity of the lack of lines. Maybe more definition in color would be nice, like shading on the clothing and stuff.

Feythfull 07-08-2011 09:05 PM

It looks incomplete to me because only parts of it are shaded the rest are flat.

Quiet Man Cometh 07-09-2011 12:39 AM

It is incomplete. It's a work in progress.

Espy 07-09-2011 12:42 AM

-sigh- Fixed the title, and, thanks, Quiet :)


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