Speaking of which. I promise a response to the rp over the weekend. <3 I know you're not worried or in a rush or anything but just to let ya know, I haven't forgotten.

Heehee, no worries. <3 I understand the homework and all that! Plus, RP'ing depends greatly on having the right creative state of mind. If that's not there, if feels like you're forcing yourself to post, and then it's not fun. I don't want to make it not-fun.

Exactly! <3

Phone with Barb...rar, me too.

Phone with alan, lol.

What are you doinnnnuh! I've made no progress whatsoever with this paper, woo!

Mom got a virus on her computer. She has a knack for getting those virus removal scams. So right now I'm trying to fix this for her, lol. I applaud her self-control at not attempting to give me advice.

Haha...aww. :) Bad mom! No clickies the sparklies!

I just got out of the shower where I wrote my other paper in my head and then proceeded to basically forget the genius as soon as I sat down!

Yes, I called myself a genius.

Dang! It feels nice to feel good! *hugs*

Aww! I hate when stuff like that happens! Are you able to get it all out now?

No, lol. I'm so scatterbrained today. It's gonna be a miracle to get this assignment done.

Focus! Argh!

You can do it! Focus focus focus! =D I'm rooting for you!

Okay! This is it! Help me make it better?

The idea of static; a sudden pop and it’s gone but then it’s back, over and over its back and it does this repeatedly. Always. The idea of stagnation; a pond overgrown with algae. So many questions about what lies underneath. Even more questions about what’s next. The article we’ve just read would like to explain and clarify some things in regard to Milton and his style of writing. Many would claim him to be a static and stagnant writer. However, after reading the article one can walk away grasping a more intricate look at the man and his works.
Much strategy is employed by Milton. Be it choice of words, choice of style or, choice of topic. He also, with a certain sense of regularity, employs the action of non-action. In this choice he creates a sort of dilemma for his readers. What happens next? When will it happen? Who will make it happen? We want answers and we want them in as clear and precise a manner as possible. Milton seldom grants his readers this wish. Instead he leaves traces and hides morsels around every corner. He entices you to continue and to keep digging and if you do you will find what it is that he’s hidden, very cleverly for you. That which could only be his treasure, a valuable and ultimately inexplicable journey through his mind. You embark on the journey with preconceptions which he very nearly never grants but upon arrival; you find that the journey has taught you something and that the hills and valleys were there for a reason other than sheer annoyance or worse yet; lack of humility.

Remember, it shouldn't sound like there's an opinion here, just stating what the article is about.

I like it! In the first paragraph, it should be "...of static; a sudden pop and it’s gone but then it’s back, over and over it's back and it does this repeatedly." In the second paragraph, I would combine the two sentences: "Much strategy is employed by Milton." and "Be it choice of words, choice of style or, choice of topic."

Other than that, I think you've got it dead-on.

Oh my! Like I got my comma's and semicolons all right?!

This one part is bothering me. The second sentence..it needs to start better.

He entices you to continue and to keep digging and if you do you will find what it is that he’s hidden, very cleverly for you. That which could only be his treasure, a valuable and ultimately inexplicable journey through his mind.

It almost seems like it could be a massive run on sentence. I don't know. Maybe it should be A treasure instead of That which could only be his yadda yadda..nah

here!

He entices you to continue and to keep digging and if you do you will find what it is that he’s very cleverly, hidden for you. His treasure, a valuable and ultimately inexplicable journey through his mind.

edit.

He entices you to continue and to keep digging because if you do you will find what it is that he’s very cleverly, hidden for you. His treasure, a valuable and ultimately inexplicable journey through his mind.

lol

Oh! It's good. That second part, although it sounds fine in our everyday language and I know how you want the infelction on it, for an MLA paper it's still a fragment of a sentence. I would but a dash where the period is so it reads: "He entices you to continue and to keep digging and if you do you will find what it is that he’s very cleverly, hidden for you - his treasure, a valuable and ultimately inexplicable journey through his mind." That way, for the sake of MLA, it's grammatically correct. =) It's sounding wonderful though! You're gonna rock this.

Thank you. <3 I wuv you.

I really do. I'm always thankful for you being there. <3

You're just special to me. :)

Alright! Now to figure out the citation part of this jibber jabber.

I agree! All the technical stuff..blargh.

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/07/
An Article in a Scholarly Journal

Think that would do? ..and it would be the same for both papers, yeah?

What are you dooooin crazy?

ps. your avi is so cute. i'm glad were here together! :) I so needed a lot more Pie time in my life.

Yeah, she is really sweet. Very helpful. I like that.

Lol! The parentals. <3

Well have fun with your D&D thing tomorrow. Do you ever play Magic? Cause I love playing magic. :P

OMG, this download for AVG is going to take forever. D; I'm so sleepy. Hurry up, silly computer.

Well, I'm here until this installs, and it's not even 1/4th done, so I'mma be here a while...How was your wonderful day? =D

It was good man. I'm looking forward to the weekend. I really want to get some sort of...stuff! Stuff, going as far as planning for the wedding. Everyone's got so many questions and I'm like, I don't know!? :P

I'm really scatterbrained, but in a good way. Just overwhelmed but for once, with good things.

What about you? Did school suck today too? :P

ALso, I haven't played Magic. Ian was going to teach me, but with school, I haven't really had time. XP

Meh, school was school. XP Wasn't exactly overjoyed about it, but it could have been worse.

Omg, I hope I don't fall asleep here on my computer. If that happens, I'm sooo sorry. D;

Take your time with the wedding! It's a special, special thing. <3 Don't rush it and let it be sloppy.

Oh I won't, that you can count on. I just want to start something. Get my ideas down. :)

Magic is funnnnn!!!

Go sleep! The computer will finish if you're not there watching it.

I guess I'll write down instructions for Mom and hit the sack. X__X Bah. How can you stay up this late, lol? You're an hour earlier than me, so it's 11 over there!

I can't sleep if the boys not here. :\ Plus. I'm the master of sleeping once I am asleep.

Sweet dreams! Give hugs and tugs to the animals and the mother.

D'awww. <33 Alright, well, have a good night when you're ready to sleep. <3

Good night! See you tomorrow afternoon, abouts.

Okay! lovelove! <33

Did you sleep well miss?

Lol, I fell asleep in the chair after posting that up there. My laptop battery died. I'm really not sure how much time passed....it was maybe 1/8th finished downloading when I crashed and when I woke up from a crick in my neck it was finished. It was like...duuuuudddeee....XD But yes, I slept well!

Steve's birthday was today, silly goose was trying to keep it secret, except I ran into his mom at Walmart. XD She invited me to come to dinner with them, so I'm off to shower after this post. <33 If I can get on tonight, I will, but I might not. =(

Love you! And love those antlers on you. <3

Aww..Pie, I hope you have a good time. You really do need tell me more about this boy!

I got to find a way to keep myself from randomly logging out on trisphee. D; Or start using firefox for only this site, because Chrome doesn't save my huge long posts hwen it craps on me