Mine is wee, so it certainly wont take long to read. I'll go put it up in the writers' forum now.


EDIT: here's the link.

http://trisphee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=5348

Haaaaaah~ The first line that I jumped to contained one of your mistakes.

-is a grammar nazi-

There are a few more than 2 there, Illusion, but I won't hold that against you ;).

I wish there were more to read. :).

Lol, I forgot to put big in there.
I meant the 2 big grammar mistakes xD, I made a lot of grammar mistakes but I'm referring to the big ones.