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Musings of Espy. Potentially best served with rueful solipsistic laughter. No longer updated on front page.
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This one I did for school. Hehe~ Bonus points for guessing which poet I'm imitating.
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Creative Writing class stuff:
worlds. (Had to include three words chosen from a classmate's list of favorite words.) "worlds" was meant to be read in one breath and really quickly. Unfortunately my teacher didn't quite like my tongue's speeding. little lies. (For this one, we took one line from a classmate from the above exercise and used it as the first of a six-line poem.) underwater. (A "response" to Sharon Olds's "The One Girl at the Boys Party", written from a different point of view.) it's got a cubic shit-ton of math references, almost one on every line. Punch (Much different from my usual poetry. We had to take a cliche, chosen at random, and create a poem revolving around it. This one's not as dark as the others, and silly bordering on ridiculous. It's got a tacky rhythm too. More practice with alliteration and assonance.) masks (Written for a slam poetry competition in the CWrit class. It's a group poem, hence the three-line series.) |
Personal stuff
War tomorrow (based off and quoting from Macbeth; done as an impromptu response to Funkduder's poems, haha...) |
Eehhhh.
Someone wanna critique? |
i like the first one :o
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I agree, the first one is nice
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-kicks the thread- Updated. Will add more later.
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I liked "Worlds" and "Little Lies" Tried two different speeds on "Worlds" and thought it sounded better when read slowly.
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Ah, really? Didn't plan for it to be that way, but reading it again, I see what you mean, it's better slower. Whoops >.>
And thanks :) |
Updated again. I really should post stuff other than my poetry, but I doubt anyone wants to read a six-page story.
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Sorry for nitpicking your work but I so like the new poems. 'Punch' was funny even if not you normal style. |
Fixed; it now reads "in the effort to not slip". My recent poems don't have any capitalization, except for Punch. Dunno why.
And thanks again >__< |
The second one is irritatingly familiar but the precise answer isn't coming. Shot in the dark and say Johnathan Swift?
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Your shot was amazingly accurate >.> -hugs- Yeah, Swift, an assignment last year.
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Heh. He's the first one I thought of when I think sarcasm, so I suppose it was a shot in the dark against someone talking ;). "The Lady's Dressing Room", perchance?
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Actually, now that I think about it, it was mostly based off Chaucer, with a tiny bit of Swift. Canterbury Tales and A Modest Proposal.
And updated. |
Updated again; yay for impromptu >.> My brain works too quickly sometimes.
...and often RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF MY DAMN HOMEWORK. |
I usually get them when I'm either walking on the street or doing something else, always with a writing implement and reasonably clear surface just far enough away to forget at least some of what I wanted to write. Last time it was while watching a nature show and a fox huunting stuff beneath the snow.
*leap* *Piff!* Om nom. |
-loves foxes hunting in snow-
They're. So. Prettyyyy. How you target prey that you can barely see or smell is beyond me. |
gray |
edit: hopefully slightly less jarring.Cold again. |
time ticking
ardor departed gray hollow nil. |
Flash of crimson
is what? I grasp at it - Fled to the deepest, darkest Most depraved corner of my mind. Ethos forsaken Cogitation convoluted Pale, sickly limbs Clinging, miserly To scraps of fading light Vestigial hope In a world left forsaken Disowned by who else Drawing ruinous breath To watch the pillars of aspiration fall Basking in the unearthly keening of the self The darkened skies radiating ash A corruption of snow. |
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