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Zenella 03-08-2011 06:54 PM

Nella's Craptastic Art ;D Freebies x_x [NEW SAMPLE]
 
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x...s/introart.png
Okay so I'm a noobie artist. I sucks, but I still love to draw sooo xD I'm just gonna post some of my art and I guess get feedback on it.
I know it's not all that great, so no flaming it or anything. Just advice and stuff? ;o

Currently Working On
Ginger - Avi
Espy - Avi
Ernya User - Couple - Avi & Roxas
Friend - Avi

Zenella 03-08-2011 06:54 PM

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x...rs/tradart.png
Gonna have to do links cause the pics are too big for the post XD
sorry, blame my camera ;x

Chibi
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Random
First chibi, I'm actually kinda proud of it ^^
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My Trisphee Avi
Ok so the eyes are kinda messed up and I know the hair isn't great and of course the dress is kinda iffy buttt overall I'm kinda proud xD
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June
For Juneberry <3 The eyes and some other things are slightly disproportional but I think I did okay o3o I'll be working on some more soon!
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water_goddess93 (Ernya)
Part of a drawing I'm working on for someone on Ernya. This is just of her avi, next I'll draw just Roxas and then work on them both sitting down together.

Zenella 03-08-2011 06:55 PM


Zenella 03-08-2011 06:55 PM

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x...s/freebart.png
I'm not quite ready to give out freebies just yet but when I am, there will be a form here for you to fill out and post :)

Zenella 03-08-2011 06:56 PM


Zenella 03-08-2011 06:56 PM

Aaaaand open. I only have one little piece of art right now but yeah..it'll grow XD

Zenella 03-09-2011 03:41 PM

New drawing up, in Traditional Art. Would anyone care to let me use their avatar for practice? It can be on any site. And it won't be great, so if you don't want it you don't have to take it xD And if you do, you do. :)

Ginger 03-09-2011 11:49 PM

You can use my avatar if you'd like :) You've got a cute chibi up there!

Zenella 03-09-2011 11:53 PM

-tacklehugs-
Thank you! :D Yours will definitely be an interesting one to draw <33

Espy 03-10-2011 12:08 AM

D'aww. Your chibi is cute :)

Zenella 03-10-2011 12:10 AM

Well thank you very much ^_^

Espy 03-10-2011 12:12 AM

Can I critique some?

Zenella 03-10-2011 12:19 AM

Yes, please :)

Espy 03-10-2011 12:53 AM

Ok, so....

The first chibi is actually really nice; you just have to work on better lines. To me, the eyes look a bit lifeless, for some reason. And...the neck might be a bit long.

Also, I don't know if you care much about poses, but that certain pose is trite. Try different ones, even in the chibi style.

Aside from that, everything's pretty cool. Looks like you just need practice, and you'll develop your style. I'd suggest you color some if you're comfortable.

Zenella 03-10-2011 01:02 AM

Thanks Espy! I'll definitely work on all that <3

I didn't work too much on the eyes, I'm not very good at drawing them with pencil on a piece of paper. I'm pretty good at doing them in Paint Tool Sai or something, though ;o Yeah, my sister told me the neck was a little long too xD I'll definitely work on that in the next one :)

Yeah, I will definitely try different poses after I've practiced some more. That was my first chibi so I just kinda went with it x_x Poses are definitely not my forte xD

Thank you again I appreciate the advice! ^_^ As for coloring, I don't have anything to color with on paper so once I get a tablet, I'll be working on CG art and then I'll work on coloring ^_^ Ugh, then I've gotta work on shading....shading scares me ;x

Espy 03-10-2011 01:13 AM

XD Once you get the hang of it, you shouldn't have too many problems with shading.

Which reminds me. Can I have a freebie, or are you already being swamped?

Zenella 03-10-2011 01:08 PM

I hope not! lol

Oh sure! ^^ What would you like one of?

Espy 03-10-2011 10:29 PM

Just my current avi; I probably won't be changing it anytime soon. (I'll post a pic if I do.)

Zenella 03-10-2011 11:19 PM

Oh it's okies, I already saved a pic ^_^

Espy 03-13-2011 05:45 AM

Oh, and another thing I noticed about your art. I think you ahve to work on the shape of the head.

Zenella 03-13-2011 11:55 AM

Thanks :)
I have a new one up. I think I did better with the head on it lol

Espy 03-15-2011 03:53 AM

o.O You've changed the eye style. Hm...This is just my opinion, but the older style seemed more unique, in a way. You've also changed the whole structure? It's pretty good :)

Zenella 03-15-2011 09:29 AM

Yeah, I'm just experiencing for now ^^ I'm also trying to do some CG art, but not sure how good that's gonna turn out x_x I'll probably be going back and forth through styles when I don't even mean to >< lol Thanks Espy! ^^

Dallas 03-15-2011 09:42 AM

Hello Zenella.

Zenella 03-15-2011 11:09 AM

Hi Dr Hoenybun :)
How are you?

Zenella 03-25-2011 04:56 AM

Sorry Ginger and Espy, I know it's taking me forever to get to the arts but I've been a little busy and stressed lately (stupid RL...) and really not been in the mood to draw :/ I've been more in the writing mood XD

Anyways, so I'll try my best to get to the art sometime soon, but I'm not completely sure when. ^^'

Espy 03-29-2011 09:15 PM

Hey hey, it's totally ok. Don't be so stressssssed~

Silverbleed 03-30-2011 05:14 AM

You might be calling yourself a noobie artist but you have to start somewhere right? I've been there too! (Good times... good times... <3) They're really sweet, you already got the cute factor in your art!

Maybe someday you can get a scanner or tablet, I'm sure you've got enough talent to make supercuties =D

Zenella 04-03-2011 03:39 AM

Thank you both Espy and Silver! ^_^

I'm definitely gonna start saving up for a tablet soon, and I have a scanner but I dunno how it works just yet D; lol


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