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Zenella 03-08-2011 06:54 PM

Nella's Craptastic Art ;D Freebies x_x [NEW SAMPLE]
 
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x...s/introart.png
Okay so I'm a noobie artist. I sucks, but I still love to draw sooo xD I'm just gonna post some of my art and I guess get feedback on it.
I know it's not all that great, so no flaming it or anything. Just advice and stuff? ;o

Currently Working On
Ginger - Avi
Espy - Avi
Ernya User - Couple - Avi & Roxas
Friend - Avi

Zenella 03-08-2011 06:54 PM

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x...rs/tradart.png
Gonna have to do links cause the pics are too big for the post XD
sorry, blame my camera ;x

Chibi
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Random
First chibi, I'm actually kinda proud of it ^^
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My Trisphee Avi
Ok so the eyes are kinda messed up and I know the hair isn't great and of course the dress is kinda iffy buttt overall I'm kinda proud xD
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June
For Juneberry <3 The eyes and some other things are slightly disproportional but I think I did okay o3o I'll be working on some more soon!
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water_goddess93 (Ernya)
Part of a drawing I'm working on for someone on Ernya. This is just of her avi, next I'll draw just Roxas and then work on them both sitting down together.

Zenella 03-08-2011 06:55 PM


Zenella 03-08-2011 06:55 PM

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x...s/freebart.png
I'm not quite ready to give out freebies just yet but when I am, there will be a form here for you to fill out and post :)

Zenella 03-08-2011 06:56 PM


Zenella 03-08-2011 06:56 PM

Aaaaand open. I only have one little piece of art right now but yeah..it'll grow XD

Zenella 03-09-2011 03:41 PM

New drawing up, in Traditional Art. Would anyone care to let me use their avatar for practice? It can be on any site. And it won't be great, so if you don't want it you don't have to take it xD And if you do, you do. :)

Ginger 03-09-2011 11:49 PM

You can use my avatar if you'd like :) You've got a cute chibi up there!

Zenella 03-09-2011 11:53 PM

-tacklehugs-
Thank you! :D Yours will definitely be an interesting one to draw <33

Espy 03-10-2011 12:08 AM

D'aww. Your chibi is cute :)

Zenella 03-10-2011 12:10 AM

Well thank you very much ^_^

Espy 03-10-2011 12:12 AM

Can I critique some?

Zenella 03-10-2011 12:19 AM

Yes, please :)

Espy 03-10-2011 12:53 AM

Ok, so....

The first chibi is actually really nice; you just have to work on better lines. To me, the eyes look a bit lifeless, for some reason. And...the neck might be a bit long.

Also, I don't know if you care much about poses, but that certain pose is trite. Try different ones, even in the chibi style.

Aside from that, everything's pretty cool. Looks like you just need practice, and you'll develop your style. I'd suggest you color some if you're comfortable.

Zenella 03-10-2011 01:02 AM

Thanks Espy! I'll definitely work on all that <3

I didn't work too much on the eyes, I'm not very good at drawing them with pencil on a piece of paper. I'm pretty good at doing them in Paint Tool Sai or something, though ;o Yeah, my sister told me the neck was a little long too xD I'll definitely work on that in the next one :)

Yeah, I will definitely try different poses after I've practiced some more. That was my first chibi so I just kinda went with it x_x Poses are definitely not my forte xD

Thank you again I appreciate the advice! ^_^ As for coloring, I don't have anything to color with on paper so once I get a tablet, I'll be working on CG art and then I'll work on coloring ^_^ Ugh, then I've gotta work on shading....shading scares me ;x

Espy 03-10-2011 01:13 AM

XD Once you get the hang of it, you shouldn't have too many problems with shading.

Which reminds me. Can I have a freebie, or are you already being swamped?


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