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Default #17
Groove Box is off? Do you mean layers-wise or just like the item doesn't belong with the avi?

I like yours! The ninja theme is done really well. Maybe more of the aqua accents would look nice? You kind of just have some at the top and nothing past the waist.
Default #18
I would try some type of eyebrow. It looks a little off without an eyebrow. The best one to go with that hairstyle is the dots in the kitsune item.

You need just a little bit of green in the center area to balance out the colors. (Ignore if you cant find anything perfect)

Do you have a requiem knight? It goes perfectly with the groove box item ^^

Idk if you actually need the rose id just keep the cards and no rose (unless there's a reason for the rose)

Overall its actually a really cool avvie :3 I love it


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Default #19
I love Requiem Knight! Totally planning on buying one... eventually. And wow, I hadn't seen those eyebrows before. Wonder if Kitsune would be hard to get. I just didn't really love how any of the shop ones looked on it. :/ Maybe I should go back to aqua instead of green?

Your avatar seems a little too cluttered. The smooth texture of the background items versus the harsh textures formed by all your accessories is kind of unpleasant. The colors are nice though and the theme is well-executed!
Default #20
I like your avatar a lot. I'm not sure about the items completely yet, so I don't really think anything needs to be fixed, added or taken off.
I loves it here!!!
Default #21
You've come to the site so recently that I wouldn't expect for you to have gathered much au or runes to buy things, so given the situation as being new to the site it is a fine avatar, but hopefully we can see more items and such in your next avatars. c:
And I can't change
Even if I tried
Even if I wanted to...
What a Doll: Pixel Shop
The [Honey] Comb: Hangout
...I can't change
Even if I try
Even if I wanted to
Default #22
I'd probably add a bit more white around the chest or arm area. It's heavy on the purple, which isn't exactly a bad thing.

~ You can dance if you want too,
You can leave your friends behind.
Because if they don't dance,
Then they're no friends of mine ~
Default #23
It seems a little bland maybe, add items with more detail?
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Default #24
Yeah, figured that would be said. I need more mula. xD

I don't really think I'd change your avi. Well, not majorly. The only thing I'd add is give the guy some eyebrows. It looks off without them. xD

~ You can dance if you want too,
You can leave your friends behind.
Because if they don't dance,
Then they're no friends of mine ~
Default #25
I would but the eyebrows gp to high to see lol
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Default #26
Yeeeah, that is a problem. xD

~ You can dance if you want too,
You can leave your friends behind.
Because if they don't dance,
Then they're no friends of mine ~
Default #27
Maybe add a belt to tie things together. Like maybe a black belt or something ^^

Its a rather interesting avatar I like it


(Im looking for lots of help with this avvie. So please suggest items and poses ect. X'D I cannot for the life of me figure out how to make her perfect)


my closet
Dark is my puppyi luff hermes<3
Default #28
Hmm, I think it's a great start.
The main thing I see is the lack of white/silver at the bottom.
And the arms seem to stand out, so maybe find something to cover
the arms (not the hands)?
Other then that, I think it's great.
nighty's sig in under construction.
Default #29
Nighty's avis are always cluterry but ALWAYS good.
Honest opinion though, I'm not really a fan of teal + violet
so, in order to "improve" it, so to speak, try using grey instead of black
or you can just leave the teal in the closet o3o
(you don't really have to do it though x3)

^Toxxic art
art by chocobo & honey
Default #30
I was trying to use the RDI for this month. |D
In all honesty, I just started clicking things and adding them. xD

As for your avatar .. I feel it either needs more black on the rest
of the body, or more red on the feet. It's uneven. Other then that,
I love it. * U*
nighty's sig in under construction.
Default #31
There's so many things to look at, a bit too many things. I'd probably minimize the items a little. The color combination is rather cool though.

~ You can dance if you want too,
You can leave your friends behind.
Because if they don't dance,
Then they're no friends of mine ~
Default #32
Hmm the legs pop out fpr some reason maybe you need to add more purlple in other areas so it balances out
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
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