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it isn't size sweetie, it's dynamics, you should try different poses, then you can get an idea on how to shade and have things hang(though since i only have shown you my shitty art it doesn't mean much coming from me)

oh XD I know different poses but i just want one for now cause like i'm busy with my main stuff that's the drawing/digital art >.>

not for selling sweetie, for practice^^:

lol, i feel stupid cause i keep on miss-interpreting what you say >.<

well i am an asshole by default but i feel bad for it anywhere other than deviant, i don't want to be rude but i do want to help and i am not sure how to do both and you'd be offended if i said it the way i phrased it in my head

... I can take asshole honey, so you can say it to me straight XD I get verbally bashed by my dad quite often (though half is jokingly) and I have a friend who's a sarcastic bitch but we all love her XD ...she knows it too.

ok sweetie but don't get mad i've had 6 years to get nicer and still can't do it^^:

long and short of it you doll like a beginner, the lines are stiff and irregualar and look pasted on instead of like they were drawn all together, you have good color sense and can back a fair horse with your base choice but you need to get a better understanding on how fabric lays not only against itself but how it lays with gravity under it, i can help you find tutorials on that but it's one of those things you cannot mimic nly realize

also i don't lke your shading, but that could just be your style though picking a lighting direction and sticking to it is a good idea(even if it's is hard sometimes) one of the girls i used to watch has nice tuts on that if you'd like a link as well

you have a lot of potential sweetie and i really would like to see it realized, with some expirimenting you could find something great but that is a lot of practice and failed arts away

...there's nothing bad about what you said and that's not being an asshole at all >.> Do people on DA flip out when they get honest critiques or something O-o

I go to an arts school so critiques like that are a norm and expected. If they find something wrong with proportions, shading, etc... by god they tell you and it's better for you in the long run >.> I LIKE critiques like that cause they actually help.

Now if you wouldn't mind... the links would be nice. I probably woulnd't read them but i'd look at the visual examples...i do better with visual than written explanations XD

*has been summon by Choco's new avatar's prettyness*

Hello, again ^^;
*have no idea what they are talking about at the present moment*

@Nefer: We were talking about art and she was giving me a critique.

yes^^: have been group banned for as much and ragged on for less(though occasionally i /do/ troll it up if i didn't take a sec to reiterate before posting)


haha, who the hell /reads/ art tutorials? give me a minute to drag them up<3

Ah ok! Well, as long as you weren't disrespectful I don't see why they should ban you O_o


And lol for the art tutorial comment, though wait a sec, speaking of tutorial... There Moon, you may actually like those ones, it's about digital art and how to color and shade like crazy *is in total love with the artist's work*
http://sandara.deviantart.com/gallery/10727768

http://scenefag.deviantart.com/gallery/24509806 ignore the newest dev's base, it looks like a naruto trace i'mma go check

@Choco: Art text books that we never use >.>

and honestly, you had me a bit worried when you said ppl though you were an asshole but what you said above is a NORMAL critique >.> We may not always agree on stuff but a critique is a critique wether it's good or bad. I'm glad I don't do alot of stuff on DA if people flip out from that kind of thing.

Critic on DA aren't that bad, it depends where you critic I guess lol. Personally the only 'bad' critic I received is on my Sephiroth and Aerith picture, but heck was he right about what he said, my shading was indeed weird on Aerith's coat thingie lol.

some people have the emotional fortitude or five-year-olds


that and i revised myself twice trying to make my post as kind as i could


and don't be mad, i mislead you on the drawings, we really are closer to the same level^^: i just didn't want it to come out as only my trashing your art