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Default #433
I think your post came out well, Mandude. It's exactly what I was hoping for, at least.

Suzeboo is a bit controlling of the rp, Lawtan, but he's very fair. Moreso than most game masters. Some of them will let you get ditched if you miss so much as a day of posting. Quantity over quality, no matter what they may say about "literacy" limits and other such nonsense.







Default #434
Nah. Suze is pretty lax on that. The only time where we all got more than a bit peeved was back in the beginning-ish of the first RP, when Funkie was like "PLOT TWIST" and chaos ensued.

And then people disappearing, but that's a different issue.
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Default #435
I really need to read that nonsense again, I swear I've looked at it, but I can never remember.







Default #436
This must have been after my disappearance. I don't recall a lot except for some random artificer that appeared behind a doorway when we met the priest with his book.

I tried to find a way to revamp Dara but she's really not meant to be a superhero.
Default #437
No, it was /before/ you joined.
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Default #438
Ah. Well, I can imagine as he was also in my cat roleplay. I had a few words with him about that too, though it wasn't too drastic then.
Default #439
Good god I seem to have missed a lot in the last few days.

Well, suppose you give me a few minutes and I'll have something written up. Time to pen 1.14MB of rage and fury.
Default #440
We should restart that Cat RP.
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Default #441
? Cat?
(Writing up Kadia ~ 1500 words)
Lawtan: A chaotic dragoness with issues.
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��s ofer�ode, �isses sw� m�g.

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Science, horror, folklore, and cuteness incoming!
Default #442
So um...1500 words is three times as long as Salone's intro for Lev. And while lots of detail is cool and all, posts that long really deter me from reading all the way though.

I mean, it might be just me.

But I've written essays that long.
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Default #443
I'll put in a "read here for the shorter bit" marker.
Lawtan: A chaotic dragoness with issues.
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��s ofer�ode, �isses sw� m�g.

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Science, horror, folklore, and cuteness incoming!
Default #444
I'm cool with long posts like that as long as they don't drag and don't break any rp etiquette.







Default #445
Kadia's intro - free to critique
Lawtan: A chaotic dragoness with issues.
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��s ofer�ode, �isses sw� m�g.

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Science, horror, folklore, and cuteness incoming!
Default #446
I'm still alive, I think. o3o Anyways, I should have more time by Monday night and should be able to start posting more again.


I'm blunt and direct.
I like to lurk and observe.
Default #447
-waves at Ari-

So I'm going to be the ass that actually takes the invitation to critique. Bear with me, I am commenting as I read through, and if you feel any of my points are unfair or do not apply, I would be happy to hear what you have to say about it.








Default #448
I agree with all those, and also my previous comment still apply.

Especially the paragraph formatting, I beg of you.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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