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Default #33
nice. i look forward to reading them.
Default #34
*nod nod* i put a link on my last post for both of the threads :)
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Default #35
i liked your story. it was written well but you could use some detailing here and there.
Default #36
lol, I think i posted it there I was more worried about story than i was detail i add in all the detail after i write a few chapters :P
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Default #37
Oh ok I understand now. It was good
Default #38
Thank you :) the reason i add detail last is because i tend to get more ideas for detail when i re read my work.
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Default #39
i understand that. and your song lyrics were well written and very tasteful. did you read the poem i have posted?
Default #40
No, May i have a link?
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Default #41
I'm not good with links but its in the writer's diary section, its titled dark poetry. its only got one poem in it though.
Default #42
... I MISSED the ANIME talk? D:

ono *goes to corner*

。[Crunchyroll] 。[Study Japanese] 。[OTKH] 。
。Youtube 。Twitch 。

Default #43
O: *lifts dk onto his head* im sorry D: i will make sure to know you are on when i start the next one XD
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Default #44
;n; wolfs rain... and .hack//sign... i missed it all

*covers up with hair*

。[Crunchyroll] 。[Study Japanese] 。[OTKH] 。
。Youtube 。Twitch 。

Default #45
I see you're enjoying your time at Trisphee! :3
Edit: .Hack!? My favorite anime next to Deadman Wonderland! ^_^
-Terror Of Death-
Default #46
Yea Reaper i like the site. what made you decide to do this?
Default #47
Join Trisphee? Oh well Darc recommended it to me after Ookami dragged him on here. Kind of funny actually. :3
-Terror Of Death-
Default #48
you make it sound like he joined against his will. and she can be rather scary. but i have to ask why did you want me to join?
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