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Default #10657
yes, one of whom was someone i really respected too, that was a kick in the guts
Default #10658
Okay, art critique time!

The hair seems a bit too detailed compared to the rest of the picture.
I think he needs nipples.
There's something off about his groin area, too. It looks almost like it's melted.
His eyes need to look more focused; is he looking at us or the thing in his hand?
The wood of the bedframe should have some markings on it so that you can tell it's wood.
His clavicle looks a tad too tilted to me.

That's all I could see that was really bothering me. Don't think I'm just bashing your art, though; I really do like it! I'm still a ways off from drawing something like that, and I admire you for having the ability to do so.


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Default #10659
he he... nipples nipples...

I need to draw more. I owe my grandmother business cards.
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Default #10660
I see nipples being tossed around. What're we doing about nipples.

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Default #10661
I am singing the indian nipple song xD since Rey was talking about it.
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Default #10662
there will not be nipples ;^; it'd take a real money bribe for /that/
Default #10663
I don't know, I just know that I see a thing about nipples and immediately get all perverted.

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Default #10664
-dances around singing jibberish-

I like how its always nipples never penis or something like lips or something.
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Default #10665
rolls in at an awkward time
hello everybody
i'm painting right now
bitches please
Default #10666
Lips? Those aren't always sexy.

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Default #10667
i think they are, along with hands. People do a lot of things with lips.
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Default #10668
what about if they're chapped?
bitches please
Default #10669
........sooo, i am too perverted to enter in this topic
Default #10670
I killed it lol
bitches please
Default #10671
maybe but i like to necro this poor thing XD hi sweetie, you want freebie art? i need something to do /right now/
Default #10672
Sure if you want. I usually do art for myself if I want it but go ahead... whatever you want to do. I guess my avi in a christmas hat or something?
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