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I have been blinded.
Blinded by a sight so beautiful.
My lips form your name,
But not a sound escapes.

I just met the boy.
The boy at the end of my dreams.
The boy at the end of the hall.
The boy nobody knows.

Is it possible,
For a boy so beautiful,
To Cure Me?

So beautiful and simple. It reminds me of how I used to find a boy so beautiful and no one really paid him much attention or really understood him. This really captures the beginning stages of love or whatever.

Thank you.
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I'm left with a kind of unfinished feeling, it slightly haunts me (as if it is deeper than just words)
a very nice poem

Lovely!

Thanks everyone.
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Beautifully haunting, conveys wonder to me :) always a good poem when you can sense the emotions

Glad you like it.
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I love the simplicity. A lot of people try to hard to complicate poetry. But I think the emotion is conveyed very well and it's definitely striking.