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So I made a new avi, and I would like to know what people think of it.
Please give me more then "I don't like it" if you don't like it. Tell me what you think I should change to make it better.

Thoughts?
Suggestions?
Rate?

Thanks for your time

-Lost

Your words hurt.
I'm human too, can't you see?
Not some stone statue with an iron heart.
I'm flesh and bone.
Just looking for a home.
Looking at the world behind glass eyes.
Bringing myself to the surface.
Past is past.
Scars are just marks of battles won.
Yet your words reopen old wounds.
I'm bleeding to death behind this icy exterior.
Throw on that fake smile and push through the day.
I'm human too... Why do you treat me like I'm nothing?

Saiyouri

#2

тнє ℓσνє σƒ мαgι¢ ιѕ вєуση∂ ƒσяgσттєη
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☪ஐﻬ☽ I like your avi. I'm not sure what you can do to
improve it. I'm never good at things like that.
But I was wondering where you got that blood
underneath you?

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uǝʇʇoƃɹoɟ puoʎǝq sı ɔıƃɐɯ ɟo ǝʌol ǝɥʇ

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Mizeria

#3

its one of the DIs
umm
Looming Nightmare I believe

"It's in the stars.
It's been written in the scars on our hearts.
Your head is running wild again, my dear.
We still have everythin'.
We're not broken, just bent.
I'll fix it for us.
Our love's enough. "

CURRENTLY: ENGAGED! ~<3

Saiyouri

#4

тнє ℓσνє σƒ мαgι¢ ιѕ вєуση∂ ƒσяgσттєη
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☪ஐﻬ☽ Cool, thanks Mizeria.

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uǝʇʇoƃɹoɟ puoʎǝq sı ɔıƃɐɯ ɟo ǝʌol ǝɥʇ

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Alpha

#5

Like the Avi and the overall picture. No real criticisms or comments other than to say that it looks good.

Mizeria

#6

No problem Sai <3

Thanks Alpha

[ Lost is my mule ;3 ]

"It's in the stars.
It's been written in the scars on our hearts.
Your head is running wild again, my dear.
We still have everythin'.
We're not broken, just bent.
I'll fix it for us.
Our love's enough. "

CURRENTLY: ENGAGED! ~<3

Saiyouri

#7

тнє ℓσνє σƒ мαgι¢ ιѕ вєуση∂ ƒσяgσттєη
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☪ஐﻬ☽ I love the difference in avis you have.

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uǝʇʇoƃɹoɟ puoʎǝq sı ɔıƃɐɯ ɟo ǝʌol ǝɥʇ

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Mizeria

#8

^-^

Thanks~
I really fell in love with this one so I haven't changed it in a while, but I needed to change the other one. I'm getting some avi art done of it
I was told to make a black and red one by the person buying the art

"It's in the stars.
It's been written in the scars on our hearts.
Your head is running wild again, my dear.
We still have everythin'.
We're not broken, just bent.
I'll fix it for us.
Our love's enough. "

CURRENTLY: ENGAGED! ~<3

Saiyouri

#9

тнє ℓσνє σƒ мαgι¢ ιѕ вєуση∂ ƒσяgσттєη
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☪ஐﻬ☽ Well at least you have a avi you can play with.

I like how both have one common color in them.

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uǝʇʇoƃɹoɟ puoʎǝq sı ɔıƃɐɯ ɟo ǝʌol ǝɥʇ

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Mizeria

#10

I actually really wanted to add white or silver to the red and black one but I couldn't figure out how to do it and make it look good
x.x;

"It's in the stars.
It's been written in the scars on our hearts.
Your head is running wild again, my dear.
We still have everythin'.
We're not broken, just bent.
I'll fix it for us.
Our love's enough. "

CURRENTLY: ENGAGED! ~<3

Saiyouri

#11

тнє ℓσνє σƒ мαgι¢ ιѕ вєуση∂ ƒσяgσттєη
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☪ஐﻬ☽ I wish I could help with that but I'm never good
at adding things to other peoples avis. I barley
ever add things to my avis.

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uǝʇʇoƃɹoɟ puoʎǝq sı ɔıƃɐɯ ɟo ǝʌol ǝɥʇ

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Mizeria

#12

I'll figure something out if I really feel the need
^^

"It's in the stars.
It's been written in the scars on our hearts.
Your head is running wild again, my dear.
We still have everythin'.
We're not broken, just bent.
I'll fix it for us.
Our love's enough. "

CURRENTLY: ENGAGED! ~<3

Saiyouri

#13

тнє ℓσνє σƒ мαgι¢ ιѕ вєуση∂ ƒσяgσттєη
»·,´·˙(´·˙¸ ¸˙·,)˙·,´•·˙·,¯´·˙·• •·˙·,¯´·˙·•╭☆╯•·.·´¯`·.·• •·.·´¯`·.·•´`·.(`·.¸ ¸.·´).·´`·»

☪ஐﻬ☽ Good luck, I hope you can.

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uǝʇʇoƃɹoɟ puoʎǝq sı ɔıƃɐɯ ɟo ǝʌol ǝɥʇ

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Sunset

#14

I like your avatar.
Then again, I like the red and black theme period. ^^
Though, if you were going for evil..not sure the crane counts....
Other than that, no comments. xD

Mizeria

#15

I can't figure out why I wanted to put that on there
You're right though... it doesn't really fit

"It's in the stars.
It's been written in the scars on our hearts.
Your head is running wild again, my dear.
We still have everythin'.
We're not broken, just bent.
I'll fix it for us.
Our love's enough. "

CURRENTLY: ENGAGED! ~<3

Lost_Ninja9213

#16

all i can think of is some more silver, but you already said that XD looks awesome!

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